
For today’s prompt on Dverse we are revisiting Emily Romano’s Mementopoetry style:
Poetry Rules:
- 2 stanzas
- 6 lines per stanza
- 2 tercets (2*3 lines) per stanza
- syllable count per tercet: 8,6,2; 8,6,2
- rhyme scheme abc, abc
Poetry Theme:
a holiday or an anniversary (formal or informal)
Helpful Links:
- We’re revisiting as Grace gave us the Memento prompt back in January 2023
- The memento poetry style – Shadow Poetry
The wedding day came and went
like the Fourth of July
fireworks
Bride and groom explode—intimate
like the Fourth of July
fireworks
Man and wife light up the night sky
like the Fourth of July
fireworks
Two kids later and we still fly
like the Fourth of July
fireworks
Benjamin Thomas
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That’s one way to make the form a little easier! I might try a write like this too.
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All right! Done. The repeating lines came to me as I was falling asleep last night and thankfully I remembered them in the morning! It won’t publish for a long while but there will be a pingback though.
Thanks for the inspiration.
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Cool.
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Yes it’s true it does make the form easier but repetition is such a great tool anyway BT…
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Thanks!
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Benjamin, I love how you used repeating lines 2 & 3 and the story they tell. A happy family is a joy and a blessing ❤
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It was fun. Thanks!
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You’re welcome.
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I love this poem!!! Joy, contentment, love pour forth from every line / word!!!
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Thank you!
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Clever! And still effective, showing every phase as a celebration. Fireworks!
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Thank you!
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Love the repetition, Benjamin!
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Glad you enjoyed it Sara!
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