
Nothing could escape…
No particle, matter
light, or shape.
Her gravitation field
was far too great;
subduing all resistance.
All I could do was wait,
until I was fully taken
by her attraction.
Benjamin Thomas

Nothing could escape…
No particle, matter
light, or shape.
Her gravitation field
was far too great;
subduing all resistance.
All I could do was wait,
until I was fully taken
by her attraction.
Benjamin Thomas
Welcome to another edition of Physiology of the Writer. In this article we’ll be discussing the effectiveness of impact characters within our stories. We can liken these impact characters to something extremely prevalent and essential within our own bodies. What is it you say? A molecular component that holds to key to life itself.
~Behold, the HUMAN ENZYME~

As I’m learning the elements of story structure, I can’t help but contrast it with the anatomy and physiology of our own human body. Enzymes are the invisible superheros of human life. I’ll give you an idea just how important these little workhorses are. Without them human life would not be exist! Our bodies would not be able to sustain the slow rate of reactions or even make life possible on the molecular or cellular level. ENZYMES ARE AWESOME LITTLE SPEED DEMONS. They’re capable of catalyzing millions of reactions per minute. They really hit the gas pedal!

ENZYME QUICK FACTS:
Great, we got that down. So what exactly is an impact character anyway? Well, we pretty much know the protagonist desperately wants something. That something faces major opposition otherwise the story would flatline and bored readers would die a painful death. But this opposition represents his outer conflict related to the antagonist or antagonistic forces. We all love a good old fashioned antagonist right? But if our characters are well crafted, they’ll also have an inner conflict that’ll resonate more profoundly with readers on a deeper level. If we balance the ingredients of inner and outer conflict we’ll make any story into a delicious page turner.
When there’s an ardent desire or want + hardy opposition x (an inner resistance to change) + impact character = PLOT -> a blockbuster page turner story
Are we always accepting to change with open arms? Definitely not. Neither should our protagonists. People are dead set in their ways fighting change unto the death if need be. Most of us if we’re honest are as stubborn as the hills. Just imagine your character in his or her own situation.

Our own experience tells us that basic human nature is stubborn and utterly resistant to the slightest possible change. As they say, “Old habits die hard”. This is especially true when writing a positive change arc. We tend to cling to characters in whom we see a gradual but distinct change. In the books we love, we’re taken along an elaborate journey of 300-400 pages in which we witness a fundamental change worthy of our tears, cheers, hope and laughter. But what or who, brings about this change? You guessed it. The enzymes. The impact character. The impact character is there along the story at critical times that help or even oppose the protagonist to change his ways. Something has to happen to him/her that impacts their life in such a way that changes them on a cellular level. This is the function of the impact character in your story. They are the “enzyme” that will cause your protagonist to undergo an inner conflict of what he or she believes to be true, thus shaking up their world for the better. Hopefully.

Give your story a boost by crafting an impact character within your protagonists character arc and see what happens! For further information on the subject please click the following The Impact Character: Why Every Character Arc Needs One. Without an “enzyme” in your story, there won’t be enough essential ingredients to sustain your novel the vibrant life that it needs.
Until we meet again!
Happy writing!
Benjamin Thomas

Howdy there!
Welcome back to another edition of the physiology of the writer! We will dedicate this weeks post to the awesome respiratory system. Did you know that the average person breathes 7-8 liters of air per minute? And uses about 550 liters of pure oxygen on a daily basis? That’s a lot of air! And that’s not even taking into account any amount of exercise you might be engaged in.
The entire respiratory system as a whole is extremely vital to our body’s functioning and survival. Without it we die. Plain and simple. Without oxygen nothing works. Plain and simple. The physiology of the respiratory system is very complicated and I won’t go into details here. But there’s one word I could I’d use to characterize the entirety of the respiratory system. RECEIVING. The lungs consume oxygen amongst other elements and delivers them to virtually every part of our body. Technically as the lungs expand and recoil they not only receive but relieve the body of excess gases when we exhale. Pretty cool huh?
As writers we can liken this receiving function to READING. Yes, reading. You hear a lot about how we need to write daily and often, but we need to read just as much.
“Great writers are great readers”
-Bestselling author Jerry Jenkins

So I did something this year to dedicate myself to reading. I joined myself to a 100 book reading challenge hosted by author K.M. Weiland! Excellent.

LIVE
READ
LEARN

READ
BREATH
WRITE
Have fun!
What’s got your eye in 2016? I hope it’s a good book!
Come challenge yourself, by joining the 2016 100 book reading challenge hosted by bestselling author K.M Weiland.
For further details please see The Reading Challenge. And stayed tuned for rewards and prizes!
You can also see what I’ll be reading by navigating to my Readers Hit List page.
Respectively yours
Benjamin

THE BONES
Welcome the second edition of the Physiology of the writer. This week we will discuss a little about the inner workings of the bones as it pertains to the writer.
One of the most essential elements of the human body, or even its functioning is the skeletal system. Bones are living organs within every human being. They have a host of cells that enable them to carry out their daily functions for maintaining homeostasis. You have the osteocytes, osteoblasts, osteoclasts, not to mention a host of red blood cells within the bone marrow. But one of the most basic functions of the skeletal system or bones, are that they provide a rigid site for muscle attachment. Which ultimately is for movement. And without such an arrangement of bones we would literally be a shapeless sack of flesh.
So you could logically say that without bones there would be no movement or locomotion. There would be no shape to appreciate, or anything to hold us together.
As writers what is the most basic element of our writing? I’m guessing it’s the OUTLINE. The “skeleton” of our writing process. Without it there’s no locomotion and no shape. It would be a complete blob. No matter how awesome the other elements would be there still would be no shape. It’s much harder to appreciate a bag of flesh just resting on the floor. Gross huh? Yup. It’s even challenging to figure out which organ is which in such a state.
So I’ve been learning one of the most important aspects of writing is the outline. By nature or design I’m a pantser. Meaning I’m not much of a planner. I see one day at a time and I go after it. But when it comes to writing, there needs to be some definite planning. Well unless of course you are a diehard pantser. James Patterson convinced me that the outline is one of the most critical components of the book. Yes. Outline. He spends sometimes a month just on the outline! Author K.M. Weiland sometimes spends 3 months just on the outline!
Without an outline I’m completely flying blind. There’s no roadmap and the characters have no idea where they’re going.
But there’s something even more simplistic than the skeleton itself, and that’s the bone marrow. In physiologic terms there’s nothing simplistic about the functioning of bone marrow. Hematopoiesis, or blood forming, is the producing of red blood cells that are absolutely vital for survival. Without it we die. Period. I know because my father died of bone cancer. He suffered several vertebral fractures, ailments, and unfortunately he passed. Multiple Myeloma.
To me the intrinsic bone marrow represents a basic story premise. Which is basically a mini outline of the entire story. Kind of like a birds eye view.
Story Premise
You can see more about story premise here: Six elements of the Story Premise
I’ve been enjoying working with a basic story premise which has been awesome! Hopefully sooner than later I’ll master outlining the novel, then structuring the novel by K.M. Weiland. I’m also reading Plot and Structure by James Scott Bell which has been an eye opener. Another way of outlining is a way I heard from Kylie Day. Click here to check it out:
More resources:
7 Point Story Structure by Kylie Day.
Story Engineering with Larry Brooks
Every writer is different. Isn’t that a beauty? So I’m curious what’s your experience? How do you approach writing a novel or short story?
Benjamin

My heart overflows
into the still of the night,
as seeping anguish overtakes the calm.
Weeping eyes worn of gnawing pains,
as wretched days grow harder to sustain.
Yet hope is fierce knowing no boundary,
her tenacious wings guide into the light.
Benjamin
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Hey everybody!
I’m pleased to announce that by the first of the year I’ll have a new serialized fiction novel available exclusively on Channillo. You can check out a preview here: Sink Imagination. The posts will be weekly once they begin. It’s going to be quite a ride for Kyle Chambers. Let me know what you think or if you have any questions.
They say a mind is a terrible thing to waste. Especially if you’re Kyle Chambers, a middle aged private investigator struggling to make ends meet. Dwelling in the midst of a declining city rife with crime, he wavers as a single parent who is trying to balance the burden of work while managing a reeling teenage daughter who longs for her own identity.
At the worst time of his life, he discovers that anything he imagines happens in reality. Only, his reality is frayed by the signs of early onset Alzheimer’s. Unsure of himself and his newfound ablility, he seeks assistance from a therapist for stability before he completely loses his grip or gets himself into trouble.
Again, let me know what you think or if you have any questions!
Benjamin

Everyone joins the merry go round at some point.
Feeling safe and secure, as the next turn whips
around the carousel cutting against chilled breezes.
The years spin astray, night and day telling their own story.
Seems like a good deal, but it doesn’t come with its own bread and butter.
At best, we try to connect with one another; building sentence upon sentence, spelling out our own history.
Written for the Sunday Whirl: Wordle 231
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